Saturday, July 26, 2008

141x365 – Ch

At a Christmas party
flirt's charisma made
every pretty girl love Ch –
swat him; he'd dance again

he muttered growls against "fags"
I've seen raw desire on 3 other faces;
when he wasn't dancing
he only watched misty men's hips

2 comments:

Mrs Slocombe said...

last line rhythm and words dancing carelessly: delight.

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

"raw desire" - wish I'd written that!