Saturday, July 26, 2008

141x365 – Ch

At a Christmas party
flirt's charisma made
every pretty girl love Ch –
swat him; he'd dance again

he muttered growls against "fags"
I've seen raw desire on 3 other faces;
when he wasn't dancing
he only watched misty men's hips
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2 comments:

pk said...

last line rhythm and words dancing carelessly: delight.

July 27, 2008 at 4:02 AM
Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

"raw desire" - wish I'd written that!

August 1, 2008 at 10:04 AM

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