putting my erotica short story draft on listserv on offer for feedback I got 3 responses:
1. went line by line for half a page, lambasted me:
you call yourself a writer -- you don't know which side of quotes to park your comma on?!?
2. you said it was erotica. it is just smut. i read it twice. i gave it to my wife. we agree. it's offensive.
3. I don't normally read this sort of thing. but thanks. (twice.)