Thursday, April 16, 2009

tribute #28 (double-length) - Jameel

accomplished and growing

universe's reminder: no one is fixed, final
different from yourself and not

fighting unseen battles like you waged
but on international competition stage.

life is understandings shifting.
craft and skill gifted from positions, vehemence

seem to dissipates as newbie creates more,
becomes considered, contemplates.

(critical pivotal stage)

what used to take moments takes hours, days, 3 months.
what used to be Right, Hard, becomes differently necessary,

all could be improved, horizon by
horizon. not haijin but haijin-minded humbling.

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